Explode your sales, profits and happiness with this 21 point professional sales letter critique...

"Here's breakthrough, specific advice from a million dollar copywriter
to turn sales pages that SUCK into sales pages that SIZZLE!"

     Paul Hooper-Kelly

Hi Fellow Entrepreneur ... the simple -- but brutal -- truth is this... all the good things you want from your life:

 * The respect you deserve.
 * A better home.
 * More leisure time.
 * That top-of-the-range vehicle.
 * The ability to lavish treats on your loved ones.
 * The luxury dream holidays.
 * Above all... the sheer joy of being debt-free with a surplus of cash to spend freely, on a whim.

... all revolve around how much your business SELLS.

And - if your sales letter isn't sucking in cash, like a Shop Vac in a bank vault - then you're leaving money on the table.

And it could add up to a whole truckload of money.

The sort of money that could make the difference between just scraping by and living a life free of debt. Or maybe even getting off the hated job treadmill altogether ... leaving behind the stupid boss and the back-biting office politics and stepping up to a bright new world where you march to the beat of your own drum - not someone else's.

And it all starts with a mega-successful sales letter - like these clients of mine enjoy ...

	YOUR NEW SALES LETTER IS CONVERTING AT 12.5% "Paul... Your sales copy is fan-freaking-tastic! We've just run a small pre-launch test using your new sales letter and it's converting at 12.5%... Previously we've passed around the cigars and cracked open the Champagne with results less than half that..."
	Simon Hodgkinson http://www.HodgkinsonPublishing.com Original e-mail held on file and reproduced here with permission

GENERATING ALMOST EXACTLY SIX TIMES THE SALES AS OUR PREVIOUS LETTER "Hi Paul, Once again you worked your magic! You created a completely new sales letter and instantly we saw sales increase. Well, it has been about three months, and the results are in. Your work is generating almost exactly SIX times the sales as our previous page."
Bob Hamilton http://wwww.OpeningADollarStore.com Original e-mail held on file and reproduced here with permission

So how do I get these results?

It has a lot to do with my 40 years of face to face selling experience - particularly when I successfully sold many thousands of dollars of life insurance.

Now life insurance is well known as one of the hardest of all products to sell - in fact it's known as the "Salesman's Graveyard". You see, you're selling an intangible: there's no physical product and there's nothing for the prospect to hold or for you to demonstrate to get them all fired up. So you must tickle certain psychological triggers to get them to buy.

Sound familiar?

It should ... because it's EXACTLY like the uphill task you face, selling on line. What's more, you have a problem far greater that I ever faced in the insurance lark.

That's because it's a complete no-brainer for the world and his dog to slap up a sales page and be YOUR competition. And so, every niche is now CUT-THROAT. And it's never been easier for your prospect to click off your site and be gone to your competitor's in the blink of an eye!

      So here's your shortcut to internet GOLD

Allow me to hand you an Unfair Advantage by putting your sales letter under the microscope and give it the same vital 21 point check-up I give to the sales letters I write for my delighted clients, like those above.

They happily pay me thousands of dollars, because they know that's a shrewd investment, which they'll invariably make a great deal of money from.

But, perhaps you aren't quite at that stage yet. Maybe you've tried to write your own sales letter - or had some "cheap date" copywriter do it for you - and the results are a disappointment.

So here's a simple, practical - and utterly affordable solution ...

By investing just $197, you can have my 21 point professional appraisal of your web site within 48 hours. Put my recommendations to work and chances are high that you'll have recovered your investment in me and be seeing your sales increase within a week or so.

But there is a catch.

      There are only FIVE slots available, right now

That's because I insist on doing your critique myself (no fobbing you off with some copy cub, who is learning the business at YOUR expense). But I only have 24 hours in my day, too. So I'm having to strictly limit this awesome opportunity to JUST FIVE lucky clients. 

That's because I'm already involved creating more winning sales letters, email sequences, press releases, squeeze pages and other red hot marketing material for my existing valued clients.

But,  like the proverb says, "A change is as good as a rest". So I find taking time out from that sort of high intensive activity to look at an entirely different sales proposition as refreshing as going down to the beach for a couple of hours surfing or a walk in the forest.

What would be a smart move for you, right now?

You can either seize this rare opportunity to have your sales letter critiqued by a proven million dollar copywriter and so step up to a brighter future for you and your loved ones, with the confidence that comes from knowing your sales letter is working like a finely tuned machine. Or ...

You can carry on as before, taking advice from anyone who offers it - regardless of their pedigree - in the desperate hope you might squeeze another sale or two from your web site.

But, as you're smart, I guess your choice is a complete no-brainer, isn't it?

So here's to your inevitable success,

Paul Hooper-Kelly
The Copywriting Secret Weapon.

P.S. Remember ... there are only five slots available right now and many people will be looking at this rare opportunity, right now. And each one that decides they want to give their sales letter a tune-up and grabs this leaves ONE LESS SLOT of the five for you. 

You'll hate yourself if you miss out, so why not do it now, whilst it's hot in your mind?